Common App Essay To Penn

<p>Can someone please critique my essay? I will critique yours in return. </p>

<p>Applying ED to Penn</p>

<p>i would love to just PM me. can you also critique mine too?</p>

<p>sure, PM me</p>

<p>I’d love to. Just PM it to me. :)</p>

<p>I would too! PM it to me :)</p>

<p>Sure, PM it on over.</p>

<p>I’d be happy to read it.</p>

<p>i am happy to read it</p>

<p>I’d like to give some feedback.</p>

<p>I’ll be applying ED to penn as well (wharton.) PM yours over and would u be able to critique mine as well?</p>

<p>I cnt send a private message since im a new user. -_- what do i do??</p>

<p>I just sent the PM’s out.</p>

<p>PM it I’m game to read it.</p>

<p>Bump bump,.,…</p>

<p>I’ll read it. PM me.</p>