Personal Statement RETRY! (Help!?)

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<p>Ok,</p>

<p>SOOOO</p>

<p><em>and cue drum roll</em>--anyways, :) , can't you tell I have ADD?
So I learned from my other post it's bad to pm your personal statement to other prospective students.</p>

<p>In that case, I wanted to know if anybody that is CURRENTLY enrolled at a UC (like cal or ucla) could see if my personal statement is ok?
I've sent it out to 5 of my friends and it looks way different (I tore it apart the other night) but I am so unsure of it. How could one be completely sure it's perfect, you know?</p>

<p>Anyways, any takers !?! :) :)</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>I think it’s perfectly fine to send it to people already enrolled in college, parents, or faculty. The general concern is you don’t want to send it to people applying the same time as you are because they can steal ideas.</p>

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<p>pm it to me</p>

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<p>bummmmmppppppp ^^^!!! Anybody else? (thanks anon btw!)</p>

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<p>Pm it to me.</p>

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<p>Thanks rwasko !
buttttt :frowning: I would prefer someone who is already enrolled. I’m not accusing you of anything I Just want to play it safe because I’ve heard horror stories lol.</p>

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<p>yeah…sure…whatever.</p>

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<p>What are the horror stories?</p>

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<p>People steal your essay/idea.</p>

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<p>Well if it was unique, then they couldn’t really steal it… IMO</p>