<p>Hi guys. I am planning to transfer ILR this fall 2014 as rising junior (International-student).
I got two great recommendations from english T.A and Economic professor.
I have TOEFL Score 100. GPA: 3.4/4.0 Cumulative at Binghamton University. HS GPA 3.5/4.0 at International school
ECs including: part time job at Mcdonald, work at Sodexo(dining), internship at asset management , Vice-president for vocal group(I mainly Rap) , Work as a translator for some company (BeMo Academy), VP for Intramural soccer (semi-finalist 2012&2013), and was part of crew-team.
I have a great common app essay , but stuck with the Cornell Supplement essay.
I just have too many things to write about....I am just worried that only way I can appeal admission is through the essay. I do not know whether I should write essay about my part-time job at McDonald&Sodexo or internship at asset management. Both experiences definitely shaped me how to I see workplace now, and change my perspective on labor industry. Can anyone suggest me???? or help me out?????</p>
<p>Thank you so much guys. I really appreciate your time and effort reading this comment.</p>