Please Critique My Common App Essay!

College Essays
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<p>Just looking for some readers to critique/edit/rip apart my essay before I turn it in. Preferably not from class of 2011.</p>

<p>I need more help content wise but also with word choice and grammar as writing is not my strong point. The essay is about 600 words long. </p>

<p>Thanks, and any help is greatly appreciated!</p>

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<p>Hm. I’m from 2011, but I’ll offer my help if you want it!</p>

<p>Just PM me if you’d like me to read it!</p>

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<p>theBybee: PMed you!</p>