<p>Just finished a draft of a commonapp essay, but it is way too long.... :( (700 words)
I know it's lacking in substance, too, but I just can't figure out how to cut out 200 words while keeping/improving on the ideas.</p>
<p>So, any kind souls willing to help edit and review my essay? :)</p>
<p>Anyone? ;(</p>
<p>PM it to me</p>
<p>I’ll read it.
I’m working on a commonapp essay as well. Do you mind trading? I just need a quick read through [tell me if i’m on topic or if i’m being too vague!]</p>
<p>Sorry, forgot to mention [if it wasn’t already obvious], I’m a high school senior. I can help with cutting down words and general critique, if you want something really in depth, I can recommend other people [but they usually want near-finished drafts]</p>
<p>pm me, i’m working on all of this stuff right now too, and i’d love to trade</p>