<p>Would anyone like to critique my two UC personal statements?
I've made some revisions to the first one, and the second essay is just a first draft.
I need to cut down on the word count a bit, but I don't know where to cut.
I have 1,081 words and the limit is 1,000.</p>
<p>Any feedback would be great.
Please reply if you can.</p>
<p>I will. Just pm me. </p>
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<p>Would anyone else like to read?</p>
<p>Just gotta get my post count up in order to send pms</p>
<p>Please reply if you can.</p>
<p>Just raising my post count.</p>
<p>Any feedback would be great.
Please reply if you can.</p>
<p>Thank you~</p>
<p>I’ll read!</p>
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<p>You can pm me as well! Good luck!</p>
<p>Sure, I’d love to read them. Just PM me</p>
<p>Anyone else?</p>
<p>I will read them</p>