<p>I think its way too generic but I have to send the same essay to around 7 colleges and time is running out. I could maybe customize the essay for a couple universities if time allows.
Please provide a statement (250 words minimum) that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve.</p>
<p>Yeah, that prompt is a bit broad, but what kind of advice are you seeking? </p>
<p>Like how to make it not a too generic personal statement? Well, you can just go into specifics, but just enough so that it won’t be completely directed to one school. </p>
<p>Hope that helps somewhat.</p>
<p>i think im goin to make it specific for every college being broad will get me nowhere ><</p>
<p>well i wrote my reason to transfer based on an experience at my current college, how it affects me, how it shapes me to who I am today. Then I stated how transfer to a different school will helps me pursue my career, what I look for in a university/college.
My essay is around 1000 words. Even though it said minimum of 250 words but transfer essay usually go between 700~1000 words.
Good luck</p>