Please Grade my SAT Essay. Thanks!

<p>jkjeremy, could you grade my essay that i posted, if you have time?
sorry i dont mean to detract from jencee’s post.</p>

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<p>Of course.</p>

<p>However, I have an appointment with a kid in about half an hour, and I’ll need every minute of that to prepare.</p>

<p>I’ll do my best to get to it at some point tonight.</p>