I am appealing to UCI, please help edit my letter?
I will PM to you. :’)
What are you appealing? If you are appealing a denial, please don’t. It won’t work.
Why won’t it work…?
Because it won’t. Colleges NEVER admit students they have denied. Why would you want a college that doesn’t want you?
For,whatever reason, your application didn’t impress them. You have to accept it and move on. They will not admit you if they have denied you.
Plus, if they are going to admit more students, they are not going to choose someone they denied over someone on their waitlist, of which there will no doubt be hundreds of people they deemed qualified but didn’t have room to admit.