Please help me with this email! I can't sleep because I am too worried!

<p>Hi. I don't want to seem like an obsessed person but I really like Emory University. I've been wanting to go to emory for long long long time. If I get rejected, I know I will get over it and find another way to be happy at other place. BUT, for now, I can't imagine myself being at anywhere else. I've been imagining myself at Emory for long time and I would really be happy if I get to spend 4 years at my dream place.
My stats are not that awesome for an asian student. I have 3.7~3.8 unweighted Gpa with 2010 superscored SAT. 660 690-M 660-December 2009</p>

<p>I couldn't apply to ED 1 because my sat score was only 1600 then. I took SAT again in October and December and finally managed 2010. I didn't apply to ED II because I thought since I jumped from 1600 to 2000, I might be able to get 2200+ in January. But reality was different and now I regret so much not applying for ED 2 at my dream school.
I can't sleep because of this. I will email them tomorrow and ask them if they can switch my application. I will send them a letter of explanation of why I didn't apply ED if necessary. </p>

<p>This is my email to emory that I am planning on sending. Could you tell me if this is okay? Like I don't come off to strong or too rude or anything? Please help me. Thank you!</p>

<p>Dear. Office of Admissions.</p>

<p>Would it be possible for me to switch my application from RD to ED II?
Emory has always been my first choice. I’ve not applied to any school for ED1. The only reason I waited to apply RD to Emory was because I felt that my test score at that time was not good enough for Emory. I studied hard and pulled my score from 1600s to 2000s. I applied RD since I was planning to retake SAT but I felt that there was no other way to show my interest better than to apply for the binding decision. Therefore, I would like to switch my application from RD to ED. Emory University has been my dream school for high school years and I feel that only the binding decision can tell you how much passion I have for your school. Thank you~</p>

<p>Ok dude, you need to calm down. Send the letter if you really want to, but don’t lose sleep over this. Yes, you have a good chance at being accepted to Emory. No, if you aren’t accepted it isn’t the end of the world. It really, really isn’t. </p>

<p>Don’t romanticize any school too much. Whether you’re accepted or rejected, you’ll feel disappointed.</p>

<p>Edit: Yes, I like your email. Send it.</p>

<p>so dude, u like my email???</p>

<p>okk!!! thank u soooo much!</p>