PLEASE! I need a quick read over of my essay!

<p>It's about art. Sounds cliche, but it felt like the right things to write about for me. </p>

<p>I really would like some advice on it, blunt advice to be specific.
also ways to make it flow better, or any areas to cut out.</p>

<p>thanks so much.</p>

<p>i'll PM you, if you're interested.</p>

<p>please, I'm a bit desperate. </p>

<p>no one else has read this.</p>

<p>it's either really good or really bad...</p>