Read my essay, please?

<p>I am working on my admission essay to an arts school. Would a few people might looking it over for me? I'd prefer it to be read by people who are in college/have graduated college, if at all possible. :)</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>sure, PM me.</p>

<p>ya just pm me</p>

<p>PM me the essay and I'll critique it.</p>

<p>I'll read it if you want. Just PM me.</p>

<p>art school? haven't read one of those before. Please send it, I'll give you the opinion of a boy who is far from artsy.</p>

<p>^likewise .</p>

<p>In college, and would gladly take a look. PM me.</p>

<p>PM me. I'll take a look.</p>

<p>just pm me and ill take a look ^_^</p>