Please proofread my Yale essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Yale University
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<p>I really would like some feedback on my 500 word supplement essay!</p>

<p>I tried to be creative and reveal several different facets about me instead of simply focusing on a single topic, but I'm not sure if I executed it well.</p>

<p>I'd be eternally grateful if you could read it! ^__^</p>

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<p>i’ll help if you want</p>

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<p>i can help you with it if you’d like.</p>

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<p>I can read it too! I’m pretty good with spotting mistakes and such :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too… I should probably be studying for exams though XD</p>