Please read my CommonApp essay for me!!! Please!!

<p>Ahhh, I procrastinated (yes, I deserve to die) and just wrote my CommonApp essay, but I think it's too short (only 370 words). Can you guys pleasssssse read over and comment on my essay?? I would appreciate it sooo much!!!</p>

<p>I’m not a great proofreader so I can’t help you there, but you shouldn’t worry about word count. There’s a 250 word minimum. You have enough. I’m sure they would much rather read through a quality 370 word essay than an essay with tons of filler and padding that’s twice as long. I would think that in most cases you’d need more than 370 words to get your point across, but if you said what you need to say, you’re good.</p>

<p>I don’t need help in proofreading so much as seeing if the point it gets across is good. Can you help me with that?</p>