<p>I used this essay to get accepted into their Native Bound program and I want to use something similar for my actual application essay. Can someone (preferably not a fellow '14er) give me some feedback on this, what to change? what to keep?
Thanks :)</p>
<p>hey you can email me at <a href="mailto:dearwarren@hotmail.com">dearwarren@hotmail.com</a>
if you want critque. I am a 2010 but first choice NYU stern :P</p>