please read my very personal essay!!!

<p>i really need some input and a good critique for my essay. i'm hesitant to show it to my peers, and i hope someone on here is willing to help me out. no 09ers please! i know no one would steal/sabotage my essay, but...</p>

<p>let me know if you'd be willing to read.</p>

<p>send it over!</p>

<p>Hi rhov!</p>

<p>I'll be honest and say that I'm an '09. I have critiqued about 10 essays here on CC so far, and I'll be happy to do the same for you ... if you critique my personal essay as well. Just PM your essay to me and include your e-mail address. (I like to mark comments directly on the essay in a word Document ... then give a 2 or 3 paragraphs about my general impressions of the essay)</p>

<p>I find that trading essays discourages plagiarism, because the other person has less of an incentive to copy ... since they already have something of their own ... and you won't get many college grads on this site ... because they're totally done with college admissions and college life is busy life on its own.</p>