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<p>Prompt: Can the daily actions of average people have a significant impact on the course of history?</p>

<p>Most of a person's life is spent in habits. What one does every day, from putting one's shoes in a specific order to deciding which route to take to work, is decided based on repetition. However, if one relies solely on this process of habit-based living, one will never truly make a mark on the world. People who take the initiative to depart from the run-of-the-mill schedule of what the average person of society adheres to will be the only ones who truly have an impact on the course of history. </p>

<p>The Wright brothers took a chance at disproving what the majority of the world's population believed and thus earned a permanent place in history textbooks. As workers in a bicycle repair shop, one would expect that these two men would not deviate from their vocation. However, both took up an unexpected hobby during their down time: they started attempting to create a manned aircraft. After many trials and impediments to progress, the Wright brothers finally came up with a first for the history of mankind: a vehicle that could take the air with a man riding along with it. If the brothers had not stopped their daily actions of going immediately home after completing a day at their job, as most people do, the history of air flight would have been delayed and perhaps subsequent inventions based on the Wrights' craft may not have ever been created. </p>

<p>Today citizens of the United States employ a type of political participation entitled protesting in order to influence their government to take action. Those who protest are using dramatic actions that deviate from the norm to drive in a point that they want to observe change. As a highly successful tool to those aspiring to see the government heed what they believe, protesting has accomplished much in the course of history. Equal rights laws in particular have a basis in this type of process. Martin Luther King in particular was an advocate on using protesting to create the Equal Rights bills and thus influenced thousands of other young adults to stage protests across the nation over the inequality faced by blacks in American society. If these normal ordinary citizens did not take up these actions, it is possible that the Equal Rights Bills would not have been passed so quickly. </p>

<p>Habits are what is familiar to every single person on the planet. However, if one truly wants to make an impact on history, one must first deviate from one's normal daily actions. The first manned aircraft was created by two brothers who stepped outside the boundaries of what was familiar to them and into the realm of the unknown. In addition, protesting is form of political participation utilized by citizens departing from their normal schedules to dramatically demonstrate that they want to see a change in the way history is being currently created. If one truly wants to create an impact on history, one must be willing to delve away from one's normal affairs.</p>