Anyone willing to proofread my "Why Yale?" short essay?

<p>I would really appreciate it =)</p>

<p>Yes, I’ll read it if you want.</p>

<p>I’ll read it. I’m a excellent writer. I’ll give you a response long before the deadline.</p>

<p>I’d like to read it too :)</p>

<p>I will read it. Yale SCEA admit here.</p>

<p>Guys, the deadline was yesterday, haha.</p>

<p>I would be glad to read it too:)</p>