Could someone please proofread my Why Yale?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Yale University
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<p>Hello (:
I never had the chance to visit Yale, so i did most of my research online about Yale. I was wondering if someone could proofread it, hopefully someone who goes there or has been admitted? :)</p>

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<p>I can proofread your essay.</p>

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<p>I am willing to.</p>

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<p>I will read it too!</p>

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<p>I will too!</p>

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<p>Send it to me (:</p>

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<p>I’ll read it as well</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you’d like (I already sent my apps in, btw).</p>