Point Out My Transfer Essay's Flaws and Weaknesses

<p>Hi guys.</p>

<p>I finished the first draft of my Common Application transfer essay last night. Would anyone care to read it? I feel like it's critical of my current college and I'm not sure if the introduction and conclusion flow with the rest of the essay.</p>

<p>Thanks so much!</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>Anyone else? </p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>