Prelim. essay on slightly sensitive topic

College Essays
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<p>I wrote this in about 30 minutes when, for some reason, I just felt inspired to write :) It's about my past mental health issues, and I was just wondering if anyone could edit/give me any feedback on it (as in, 'too whiny', 'doesn't say enough about you', 'boring', 'uncomfortable', 'bad topic', etc.)</p>

<p>Any takers?</p>

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<p>I'll help, PM it to me, if you want.</p>

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<p>I'll give feedback too</p>

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<p>Sure, I'll help you out! :)</p>

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<p>thanks, all of you. I'll pm it to you today.</p>

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<p>if you dont mind, pm it to me too.</p>

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<p>PM it to me, por favor</p>

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<p>PM it. =]</p>

<p>-twiddles thumbs-</p>

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<p>Pm me :3</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I'll read it. :D</p>

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<p>i'll PM it to the rest of you all today. sorry i didn't see these responses earlier! thanks!</p>

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<p>PM me please!</p>

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<p>pm me pleasee..</p>

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<p>If you PM it, I will read it</p>

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<p>I'm also learning about college essays, and am interested in giving feedback (as well as learning from your essay as well).</p>

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<p>I'll give it a read...PM please!</p>

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<p>cool, more replies! I'll PM it to you guys today. </p>

<p>To everyone who has already given feedback: thanks again! you've helped so much!</p>

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<p>pm me
ill be glad to</p>

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<p>PM me as well! :)</p>

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<p>I wrote a "mental health" essay when I applied in 07, and I'm willing to help. :)</p>