common app. first draft (about weightlifting)

College Essays
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<p>um... well i'm really nervous about it. i don't even know if i chose a half decent topic... </p>

<p>did it in like 4 hours while fueled on caffeine. obviously, i will need to fix it up a lot. does anyone care to read and critique it?! i will appreciate so much if you do!</p>

2

<p>sure i will do it. just pm it to me</p>

3

<p>I’ll help you out with it.</p>

4

<p>i’ll take a look</p>

5

<p>i’ll have a look…wil be an honest critique</p>

6

<p>bump help me out!</p>

7

<p>if you need additional feedback, PM me the essay with prompt</p>

8

<p>I’ll critique it, PM it over :)</p>

9

<p>If you would like me to critique it, you can PM it over.</p>

10

<p>bump more help needed. sent to 8 people and only one response back :(</p>

11

<p>bump any more readers?</p>