proofread a kickass essay for UVA anyone? and chances

<p>anyone want to read a good suck up essay for me? i was deferred, and i would like some more opinions. my email is <a href="mailto:crichessill@yahoo.com">crichessill@yahoo.com</a> email me there, if ur interested or aim me at igetblockedalot2<br>
here are my stats if u feel like commenting ..</p>

<p>race- asian applying to engineering instate
SAT i- math 680 verbal- 620
sat II- math I= 700 math II= 700 writing= N/A yet
gpa- 4.32 as of last year, but after ths semester 4.43 weighted i think... rank 65/488</p>

<p>senior class schedule
1. AP Government
2. AP French
3. AP Physics
4. AP Calculus
5. Advanced Computer Info Systems
6. English 12 regular
7. Multimedia Communications </p>

<p>Track (Varsity) 10,11,12
French Club(* Secretary) 10,11,12*
SOHO 9,10,11,12
FBLA 10,11,12
Astronomy Club 9,10,11,12
Math Honor Society 11,12
BETA club 11,12
Peer helpers 12
Volunteering at beth sholom (9-12) altogether i have about 100 hours...</p>

<p>Essays and recs- good i think...
i was also suspended during my freshman year... for computer violations.. but once i talked with a jhu admission officers. he siad that comp violations are no biggie, but still it will be considered. iafter i was deferred, i sent uva a letter explaining in detail about suspension and now, i am writing an essay...</p>