proofread a kickass essay anyone? and chances

<p>anyone want to read a good suck up essay for me? i was deferred, and i would like some more opinions. aim me at igetblockedalot2
here are my stats if u feel like commenting ..</p>

<p>race- asian applying to engineering instate
SAT i- math 680 verbal- 620
sat II- math I= 700 math II= 700 writing= N/A yet
gpa- 4.32 as of last year, but after ths semester 4.43 weighted i think... rank 65/488</p>

<p>senior class schedule
1. AP Government
2. AP French
3. AP Physics
4. AP Calculus
5. Advanced Computer Info Systems
6. English 12 regular
7. Multimedia Communications</p>

<p>Track (Varsity) 10,11,12
French Club(* Secretary) 10,11,12*
SOHO 9,10,11,12
FBLA 10,11,12
Astronomy Club 9,10,11,12
Math Honor Society 11,12
BETA club 11,12
Peer helpers 12
Volunteering at beth sholom (9-12) altogether i have about 100 hours...</p>

<p>Essays and recs- good i think...
i was also suspended during my freshman year... for computer violations.. but once i talked with a jhu admission officers. he siad that comp violations are no biggie, but still it will be considered. iafter i was deferred, i sent uva a letter explaining in detail about suspension and now, i am writing an essay...</p>

<p>it would be easier to propose chances if we all knew where you were applying in the first place.</p>

<p>i am dumb... university of virginia, virginia tech, vcu honors program</p>

<p>bump......</p>

<p>bump.......... come on put some replies</p>

<p>bumppppppppp</p>

<p>Your math skills don't seem to be strong enough to do engineering. How have you done on competitions like the AMC?</p>

<p>not well.. i dont even plan to do engineering anymore... most likely i wll transfer after a year,</p>

<p>Bump.......</p>

<p>bump... again..... come on</p>

<p>bumppppppppp</p>

<p>Dude, stop bumping. People have seen your thread and commented.</p>

<p>What is a computer violation? You cheated in a test? You send death threats via email to your comps teacher? You looked at hardcore interracial pornography?</p>

<p>no. our county gave us laptops and restricted us from playing games and stuff. i just loggeed in as adminstrator and i played games on my computer... in other words, i took of the firewall of my comp...
man on fire... thers only been 2 people who commented.. u think thats enough? would u be satisfied with that?</p>

<p>allureNY from which town in westchster do you live?</p>

<p>crich, since you're instate UVA is looking pretty good .. although as you know, nothing is for certain</p>

<p>Grades are O.K., although not fantastic. Extracurriculars are not bad. I think you have great chance at each and everyone of those colleges.</p>

<p>i'll be happy to read it, just private message me</p>

<p>i emailed u thru this site... did u get my email farbdogg? anyone else interested?</p>

<p>no try again maybe</p>