Proofreader for Yale Supplement Essay

College Essays
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<p>I've been lurking here for a while now, and this forum has already helped me immensely with my college applications. So thank you!</p>

<p>Fresh off that expression of gratitude, I'm about to ask even more of you all...would anyone mind reading a Yale supplement essay due the 1st? I'd really love some brutal honesty from someone who is familiar with the college essay and doesn't know me well already.</p>

<p>I'm also nervous about the word limit...it says "fewer than 500 words" and I'm at 680...</p>

<p>Could someone help out a nervous 2015er?</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. As for the word limit, I’d really suggest cutting that down. You’re 180 words or 36% over the suggested limit.</p>

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<p>Thank you SO MUCH! I just sent it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too. Send it if you want constructive criticism.</p>

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<p>Ooh, an actual use to my English minor. I’d love to proofread.</p>

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<p>Hey guys! Sorry to reawaken this thread but I’ve just finished my essay for the common app and if I could get a reader I’d be ecstatic. I’d just send it on over to one of the remarkable people who already sent feedback about the Yale essay but I don’t want to burden them without their explicit permission!</p>

<p>If somebody could help me out once again, that’d be fantastic!</p>

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<p>I can read it and give you my opinions of it. I’m also a 2015 college applicant but my early decision essays are all finalized and submitted already.</p>