<p>So I put a short dialogue between someone and me for the beginning sentences,
but the thing is that I kinda continued the story relating to the dialogue in my third paragraph..instead of right after the intro sentences..</p>
<p>it's like</p>
<p>-a dialogue
-a short intro (not exactly related or explaining the dialogue above)
-a short paragraph (here, the story of the dialogue)
-another short paragraph
-the conclusion</p>
<p>(i didn't actually write my essay like a 5-paragraph essay but the 3 separate things that are relevant to my whole essay are told.)</p>
<p>Do you think it's okay to do like this?
I don't want to share my personal essay with someone else...so please excuse me for that!</p>