<p>Prompt: Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it. (Approximately 250 words)</p>
<p>Would any current student be willing to give me someone feedback on my short essay?</p>
<p>Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>bumpbumpbump</p>
<p>I’ll read it. Are you looking for constructive criticism or more gramatics? I tuned my essays for quite some time so I could help there haha. I also applied for fall 2011 but my apps are all submitted and done.</p>
<p>I’ll read it. PM it to me.</p>
<p>Send it over</p>
<p>Hey,</p>
<p>send it over and i’ll get back to you.</p>
<p>i’ll read it if you’d like.
i also applied to UMich, but submitted my app yesterday- now its just sitting for two months with my fingers crossed
good luck :)</p>
<p>I just graduated from Michigan in May, and am on here because I’m trying to convince my brother to apply to Umich but I’d be happy to help you out with your supplement. Unfortunately it looks like I won’t be helping my brother… lol</p>
<p>I’ll read it. I’m a grammar nazi though so I can send you corrections if you’d like. PM it</p>