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PROMPT:Nature (one’s genetic inheritance) affects one’s character and behavior more than nurture (one’s life experience)
ESSAY: A man living in a rural area has a different personality than that of his brother who lives in the urban areas;both personalities are different from their other brother’s personality,affected by him living abroad in another continent.Nurture changes people’s personalities more than nature does.
Studies showed that scientists isolated in Antarctica,for example, are much more likely to develop hostile personalities than their peers in more communicable areas Nurture Does change people significantly.
In the movie Cast Away,Tom Hanks is isolated in an island in the middle of nowhere.His personality changes everyday.From a loving but spoiled man,Hanks turns into a hardened stiff man.
Another example how circumstances change people significantly is The Industrial Revolution.The Industrial Revolution marked the beginning of Urbanization.Urbanization is the mass movement of people from rural areas to cities.The behavior of the people people changed remarkably.From relaxed,sociable and ,in a way, tidy people to stressed,tensioned rowdies.the change of people’s behavior during that time is still studied today.The surrounding environment changes people like no other factor can.
To sum up,people are like moist clay,easily shaped by the environment.Throughout history,power shifts always changed the people.Nurture does change people