Read and rate my yale essays, make it rain philovibucks.

College Essays
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<p>Hello, could you help me evaluate and improve my essays? There are two, 500 words long, well-written, and probably interesting. I'm a good writer. Promise.</p>

<p>One essay's about how I came to love psychology in a hard time in my life.
The other is about a really specific reason why I want to go to Yale.</p>

<p>For extra flexibility in your assistance, I offer two options:</p>

<p>"Read and Rate" — You read one or more of my essays (your choice), give it a rating 1-10 as far as quality and admission-help goes.</p>

<p>"Blessed Editor Man" — You read my essays and point out places where/ways that I can improve. </p>

<p>In return for your altruistic deeds, I will give you one (or two, if you go all out) PhiloviBuck, renewable for any college admissions consultive wish you'd like, as good as its worth. It's called reciprocal altruism, dude.</p>

<p>If you aren't up for either or want yet another chance at my highly valuable (not really) PhiloviBucks, visit my chance thread and make a helpful comment. </p>

<p>I would then be extremely obliged to make it rain like it's Hurricane Sandy up in this forum, wouldn't I?</p>

<p><a href="http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/yale-university/1408089-how-good-my-chances-yale.html%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/yale-university/1408089-how-good-my-chances-yale.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

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<p>Philovibucks, dudes! Make it rain!</p>

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<p>I’ll read your essay. PM it to me. Actually, PM both. It’s Friday - why not :)!</p>

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<p>Wheeee.</p>

<p>Waaaa.</p>

<p>Wooo.</p>

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<p>Hmm? It’s Friday night and I’ve got nothing to do (until Sunday) at least :p.</p>

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<p>Buump I love you all.</p>

<p>Two Philovibucks for IceQube</p>

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<p>I’ll go for “Blessed Editor Man” and read either one of them if you can critique my EC essay :)</p>

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<p>I’ll go with Blessed Editor Man as well. Feel free to PM me! =)</p>

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<p>I’ll read!</p>

<p>Sent from my SGH-T989 using CC</p>

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<p>I’ll read them</p>

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<p>Ah. I can’t read that many essays!</p>

<p>I’ll roll a dice and pick two of you.</p>

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<p>You’re an interesting fellow…I’ll read them</p>

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<p>Many philovibucks for many people.</p>

<p>I accidentally deleted all my private messages, and am thus disoriented.</p>

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<p>I need more essays read.</p>

<p>Don’t you dare Chance me.</p>

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<p>Ill take a read. PM me.</p>

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<p>Coolio. Anyone else, please?</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll read and rate yours if you do mine!</p>

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<p>PM me ill take a look at it.</p>

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<p>Pm me! I’d love to read them!</p>

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<p>More, please.</p>