<p>the prompt: Prompt #1 Describe the world you come from for example, your family, community or school and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations. </p>
<p>my essay:
My family consists of a humble troupe of valiant settlers, a mother and father with a restless intention of success for their two sons. My family has provided me with a world that is very open minded and un-biased towards even some of the wildest ideas and goals , which has allowed for me to develop my thoughts in a very unrestricted manner, leading me to be more creative, more in touch with my subconscious, and more socially interactive when it comes to new situations, ideas and responsibilities. Also, because of this, I
Am constantly involved in artistic projects and events. Ever since I was a very young man I have acted in plays, drawn frequently, sang in choirs, and have taken up many facets of expression because of mere interest, and the desire to learn more.
when my parents decided to move to a new community at the brink of my elementary school career, I began to be possessed by the power of words, and literature. Poetry was introduced to me in the 3rd grade, and a sporadic growth of determination swept my limbs toward the nearest pen; it was then when I was extracted from the general interest of a toddler, and like a tightly vacuum packed sardine ration, fastened to my dreams. With a mother who could sing well, it was only customary that I did too, which resulted in my singing in the school choir, and ultimately my position in the first and only band Ive been in due to one of the members overhearing me sing the national anthem at school. Me and the members of the band I joined at that young age have become a tightly knitted circle of very close friends, and as a matter of fact, we still make music! Because of the fact that the only friends Ive had for 11 years are musical artists, we have created a constant musical community leading to my subjection to the majesty of the musical language. Now music is the main resident of my thoughts, and I dream of little else, along the course of 11 years I have developed a passion and selfless devotion to the composing and studying of all that is sound. My parents have always been concerned about how I plan to make a living and how successful I will be; their concern has provoked me to fend for a purpose. Through the embrace of my dreams I am assured of my distant success, and for this I am a confident and positive person. It is as if some obscure expedition of fate took hold of the course of my suburban vacation, the path of my adolescent life; and directed me toward meaning.</p>
<p>(written on mac text edit;many errors)</p>