read/evaluate my essay?

<p>I've been browsing these forums for a while, but I finally decided to make an account because I really need advice for my essay, since I'm trying to get it done over the summer. I just typed up a first draft of one of the topics I thought of (I need to cut it down some), but I'm still on the fence about it. I thought of this topic because it has a lot of funny little anecdotes I thought might make it more interesting, but I'm not sure if it's the best way to represent myself. I'd really like some opinions!</p>

<p>If you need some help I would gladly help you, PM it.</p>

<p>pm it over :P</p>

<p>pm me and ill take a jab at it</p>

<p>pm it to me! I’ll read it :)</p>

<p>i’d like to read it!</p>

<p>Sure pm me</p>

<p>PM it and i’ll give it a read.</p>

<p>pm me:) i might be able to help</p>

<p>pm me! I’ll help</p>