Read it and weep

Applying to College
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<p>I wrote an essay, it's over 500 words, and I didn't have a particular prompt in mind. I thought maybe I could use it if a college has a free-choice option, but I wrote it mostly so I could get used to writing again before I work on my real applciation essays. I cut out some of the better vocabulary because It didn't sound right, and I still don't think it transitions properly. Anyway, I'd like to know what you all think because I'm not sure if it's good enough to send anyway. I'll pm it if you want to read it.</p>

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<p>Sure, but you'll have to tell me the focus your essay is.</p>

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<p>i'll read it. pm me.</p>

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<p>il give you some good feed back</p>

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<p>i'll read it too. PM me.</p>

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<p>I'd like to res it. PM me too :)</p>

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<p>*I'd like to read it</p>

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<p>i'll read it too. PM ME.</p>

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<p>Hear Hear. I'll read it too.</p>

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<p>I'll read it too.</p>

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<p>I will read it, pm me</p>

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<p>ill read it, pm me</p>

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<p>Send it ova here</p>

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<p>We'll, I'd be more than happy to read it, but it doesn't seem as though you need anymore help. ;)</p>

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<p>Send It To Me!</p>

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<p>I'll be happy to read it if you need more help!</p>

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<p>i'll read ittttttttt</p>

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<p>i'll read it. PM me.</p>

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<p>I will give you my expert advice, PM me. Infact I cleared my inbox</p>