Read my Common App essay, por favor!

<p>I'm in dire need of feedback, just to clarify that I'm actually writing these things correctly. :)
I chose prompt #1 (Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you), by the way.</p>

<p>I can read it :slight_smile:
And you will have it back for tomorrow tops.</p>