Read my common app essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hey all, so for american lit. class at the end of the second semester, we wrote some sample college essays.
Just like the rest of you, I really do not want to write college essays. So I looked back on these essays that I wrote for english. I suppose I threw up sappy (and maybe not entirely true) information about what my culture means to me on a sheet of paper. It isn't half bad but i'd appreciate it if a few people would give it a read and give me some feedback?</p>

<p>my goal is to be original. i honestly have a plethora of things i could write about (model un, robotics world finals, community service stuff, working in a hospital in a third world country), but i feel like every college admissions panel reads thousands of those, so i tried to be a little different.</p>

<p>anyways, i can PM my common app essay and my u of m supplement (we had to answer last year's u of m supplement question as well for english class) to anyone that is interested</p>

<p>thanks to all of you!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! Just PM it to me</p>

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<p>sent them! thanks so much!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you’d like.</p>

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<p>If you PM me, I can help you out! :slight_smile:
Go blue!</p>

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<p>I will definitely read it - please PM it to me! :)</p>

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<p>thanks to all of you!</p>

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<p>I can help read!</p>

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<p>I wouldn’t mind reading it. :)</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a read!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>Thank you all! it’s in your private message inboxes!</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>Ill read it and help if I can! :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read them too! PM me. :D</p>

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<p>thank you all! i’ve PMed it to you guys. if anyone else is interested, i’d be happy to send it to you. i’ve made a few changes to one of them!</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to help :)</p>

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<p>i’d like to read them too!</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look pm me!</p>