<p>I was confused in the first essay when you first said you were pondering the answer to the question, which you got correct, but did not know why (guess and check)…then later you say you weren’t challenged enough in math. There seems to be a disconnect.</p>
<p>swiss that’s really clever and cool haha. i wouldve loved it too</p>
<p>i think that the essay is well-written, especially the first half chunk. i like how you expressed your love for math through your teacher, and not just bluntly saying ‘i love math and these are my reasons for it’. however i think your last sentence can be improved. “my goal: bewildered by math” seems a bit abrupt and incoherent to the elegant style of the rest of your essay.
overall a great essay. how long did it take you?</p>
<p>Referring to the second essay: the beginning waters down the focus of your essay too much. What I mostly got from reading your essay was that you liked to help your classmates with math and texting your girlfriend. try to make it more focused, clearer, more about you.</p>