Read My Essay? Extra Critical please...

<p>Would anybody like to read a draft of my Common App "Place where you are most content" prompt? Does it answer the prompt? Feel free to be extra critical as it is just in its first stages! I will DM you. Thanks! </p>

<p>I’ll help you out!</p>

<p>PM me : ) </p>

<p>PM me! I love it when people ask me to be extra critical! :D</p>

<p>I am known for being critical. I have been responsible for many a tear and consoling box of chocolates. I always substantiate my criticisms though. I will never tell someone that something is bad without explaining why I take issue with it.</p>

<p>I can try to help ^-^ PM.</p>

<p>@ccstudent123‌4 Critical is best! I love hearing other’s opinions as it is only a rough draft! The more eyes the better! </p>