<p>I wrote my common app essay today, and I really need some opinions of it.</p>
<p>I use some curse words, and insinuate things about some touchy subjects, but I think I do it quite well and it fits in the context. Is anyone willing to have me email it to them and let me know if it's just like, TOO much?</p>
<p>Any help would be appreciated, just let me know if you are willing!! Thanks!</p>
<p>I can read and give my opinion if you’d like. I’m a rising senior too, but don’t worry, my essay is set in stone. :)</p>
<p>I can read it too if you’d like!</p>
<p>I’d be happy to help you! I have extensive experience as a tutor and essay editor, so hopefully I can be a boon to you :D</p>
<p>PM me and I’ll give you my email address so you can send it to me via email.</p>
<p>Sounds fascinating! Can I read it? I’m not applying for college this year, so rest assured I won’t steal your work.
Just pm me :)</p>
<p>ok if you’d like another reader, I’m intrigued if you do pull it off. Sounds risky.</p>
<p>Sure! PM me :)</p>
<p>If you do need another reader, I’ll read it. :)</p>
<p>I would like to read it as well. It sounds interesting</p>