<p>I just finished my college essay about an event I started to benefit children in Uganda. I would really appreciate some feedback on it. Thanks</p>
<p>I would be happy to take a look. I have a B.A. from Stanford and a J.D. from Harvard. Since joining CC, I have provided essay comments on 78 drafts for 38 students. If you would like to get started, PM me!
JP</p>
<p>I sent it thanks a lot!</p>
<p>Sure, PM it over.</p>
<p>You can send me it. I would love to take a look! =]</p>
<p>if you still need help, pm me</p>