<p>For commonapp prompt 2, the failure one.
it's very very rough, and I have yet to make a better conclusion/lesson learned, but it's overall the idea... i need someone to read it and make pointers about the direction/story whether it's too shallow, too cliche, or just otherwise terrible.
i wrote this only as a starting point, so feel free to give LOTS of constructive criticism.
btw, no need to fix grammar/spelling, that I can do and will do once I get the idea right.
ty :)
i can pm it to you</p>
<p>Sure, I’ll read it. You can PM me. :)</p>
<p>I can read of need be</p>
<p>U can send it to me 
I’ll read it :D</p>
<p>You can PM it to me.</p>