Read my essay?

<p>I've written my activity essay for Georgetown and I wanted some opinions on it. I also think it should be a bit shorter even though there's no limit but meh. Unfortunately, as someone who writes a lot of have that thing where I think nothing that I write is any good even if it is :P It's a real pain in the tucas. Anyway, would anyone like to read it for me?</p>

<p>Bump. Anyone? </p>

<p>I can help.</p>