Read my rough draft?

<p>I just wrote a rather abstract rough draft for a general common app. I'm looking potentially for any current college students to read it to give me some advice, as it certainly is not finished. It's intended for competitive colleges, and I tried to make it about me but also somewhat philosophical at the same time. Thanks!</p>

<p>Well, I did get one person read through it, but I’m still looking for a few more, as I’m not very well versed in these.</p>

<p>Send it over, I can look at it.</p>

<p>I would love to see it- pm me</p>

<p>You can send it to me if you wish(:</p>

<p>Pm it to me!</p>

<p>Sounds interesting! pm it to me!</p>