Read my "Why Duke?" essay?

<p>Would anyone be willing to read my "Why Duke?" essay and give some feedback? It would be much appreciated!
I know it's due pretty soon but it would make feel a little less worried about it haha. This application means a lot to me :)</p>

<p>Sure, i’ll take a look msg me</p>

<p>Thank you so much! I will message it to you in a little bit, I need to make 15 posts before I can message anyone</p>

<p>I’ll take a look and respond with comments and feedback. PM me.</p>

<p>Thank you! Will do :)</p>

<p>Sure, i’ll take a look at it! PM</p>

<p>Sure PM it to me</p>

<p>Thank you guys! :)</p>

<p>I’ll be willing to help as well! just pm me</p>

<p>Thanks in advance! :)</p>

<p>I’m wondering about the 2nd essay which asks someone other than a teacher to write for you. Do parents or siblings actually write, or is it better to have a friend do it?</p>

<p>^I know a few people who got in who had a sibling write the supplemental recommendation. </p>

<p>I personally had my boss write one for me.</p>

<p>RahulKShah, thank you. Are you applying this year, or are you already in Duke…</p>

<p>I’m a good writer. PM me and I’ll give you a great and speedy response.</p>

<p>Medavinci, I applied this year and was accepted ED.</p>