<p>i can’t seem to be able to write a terrific personal statement in only 200 words.</p>
<p>my english ap teacher recommends we “show, not tell” and though i can definitely do that in my 600 word response, i can’t fit it into my 200 word responses.</p>
<p>i wrote one 200 word reponse yesterday, and i think it’s mediocre.</p>
<p>anyone out there want to read my first response and give me some input? preferably a current UC student?</p>
<p>thanks a lot. :)</p>