<p>I would love it if someone could give me feedback on my essay. As the subject suggests, I am responding to the Common App failure prompt: "Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what lessons did you learn?" Summed up, it is about how I, a germaphobe, tried to fix a vacuum cleaner. I will critique yours in return. </p>
<p>Thank you!</p>
<p>i’ll read it</p>
<p>i’d like to read it!</p>
<p>I just tried to PM it to both of you, but I’m not sure if it worked… let me know if you get it, and if not, I can resend it. Thanks for offering to help out!</p>
<p>I’d be happy to help you! I have extensive experience as a tutor and essay editor, so hopefully I can be a boon to you :)</p>
<p>PM me and I’ll give you my email address so you can send it to me via email.</p>
<p>I can read it!</p>
<p>I would love to read it</p>
<p>I would love to read it</p>
<p>You’ve got my interest. I can read it</p>