<p>Hey guys! I'm working on my common app essay. I just want to know if what I wrote was too generic. The prompt is "Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story."
I'm applying to a few of the ivies to give a general view of the applicant pool. Please let me know if you can help me out!
Your help will be much appreciated. </p>
<p>I edit essays every year for college admissions. I would be happy to take a look at your essay. </p>
<p>I would be happy to read it for you.</p>
<p>I’d gladly help!</p>
<p>I can critique/edit it if you need some more advice!</p>
<p>I can help!</p>