<p>I wrote my essay for Pace University, it's suppose to be an autobiographical essay so I hope I did it right. I'm still working on the ending so I could especially use help on that part. </p>
<p>Anybody want to give it a shot?</p>
<p>PM me what you have so far including your ending and let me know its prompt is to write an autobiography. I’ll offer you some feedback.</p>
<p>If you want another critic I’ll read it too</p>