Score my essay pleeease

<p>Hello guys,
I have a question. Actually, I have a request. Recently, I took the SAT.The scores are out. I thought I did VERY well on the writing essay section employing a good organization strong SAT vocabulary and decent approach.However, the score they set was shocking so please score me so that i determine whether to send a score verification or not . </p>

<p>ASSIGNMENT: Should people change their behavior depending on what situation they are in? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.
PS: I didnt know how to upload the essay images plz help :O</p>

<p>^Upload the images on ■■■■■■■ and put a link to the images’ URLs in a new post(:</p>

<p>I’m an international I don’t really know how to judge the relevance of my examples
Without too much brainstorming I would say that my examples would be:

  • Italie during the WW1 (they changed their mind in exchange of few territories)
    -Politics in france, how a man who belonged to the right wing succeed in being ministery in a left wing government by revising his opinion
    -a personal example: Not to be perfectionist and to know how to hide his feeling after a A- in front of people who would kill to have this grade (we don’t have this system of notation in france but never mind, It’s a real example)</p>

<p>Please, tell me whether these examples are pertinent</p>

<p>I’m a SAT prep tutor – I’ll score your essay and give you feedback. Just ping me when you’re able to upload the essay!</p>

<p>welcome,.your essay is ok</p>