<p>This has probably already been answered, but was it after Paragraph 2 for the blind-book author?</p>
<p>@VJK</p>
<p>It was when he woke up the next day. The question specifically asked you to break it where there was a lapse in time.</p>
<p>^ Agreed.
For the other one, I put that he got postcards in Delhi. That one was the only one that stuck out to be right to me. But I’m not sure.</p>
<p>i put raindrops on the train, since it said which describes the train best</p>
<p>^ I thought it said what described how he felt or something along those lines.</p>
<p>i’m pretty sure the question had somethign to do w/ describing the train, but it’s possible i misread it</p>
<p>I think you use who instead of whom because of the tone of the essay. We are almost made to think the seedlings are growing people rather than objects.</p>
<p>but w/e its too late for me to change answer</p>
<p>It is not “who” or “whom.” It is “that.” Even PBS has a special called “The Dogs THAT Changed the World.”</p>
<p>yep, i definitely remember putting “that” as an answer, rather than who or whom</p>
<p>I think I missed the question for the list on blah, blah, AND blah… but the reason I put a comma after the last blah is because it was separating it from something completely different. If anyone can clarify?</p>
<p>Oh, and. The hot waiter one was no change? That question gave me FITS for way too long!!</p>
<p>For me:</p>
<p>Waiter= No change
Who, whom, that=That</p>
<p>LMU - do you remember the sentence? i definitely did not put a comma after the 3rd one, but i can’t remember the sentence to give you an explanation</p>
<p>evidenced by</p>
<p>Start a new paragraph with “I woke up…” The question said that the author wanted to split up the passage based on the date, so he would’ve woken up the next day.</p>
<p>The raindrops shimmered down the window. The question asked what choice gave the best visual imagery of the trip, and postcards were definitely not the answer to this (or any other question).</p>
<p>evidenced by</p>
<p>For the dominate one, the answer was whatever only had a form of dominate (dominance, dominate, dominated). The answers that included who dominated, whom dominated, etc. were all wrong.</p>
<p>The waiter question was no change. All the other answers were ridiculously convoluted.</p>
<p>each shiny cylinder (no commas)</p>
<p>Does “after paragraph 2” sound right to anyone?</p>
<p>yea, i put that on the last question i think</p>
<p>Did anyone bubble in a lot of As and Fs - no changes?</p>
<p>Junie-- It did feel like I did have a lot of A’s and F’s… It almost started to feel like too many!</p>
<p>What was the answer to the writing one that was like blah blah blah, blah blah blah blah-
and it was no change or change - to ,
I put change to ,
Is that right?</p>
<p>I did also, Kaplan.</p>
<p>i know this happened a bit earlier in the thread, but the question about the train said a visual aid so I put the one with the rain falling on the side of the window.</p>