Short Personal Statements... feedback needed!

<p>Hello!
I'm applying to the University of Central Florida, and they have rolling admissions so I thought I'd get started early. I just finished my personal statements (no other essays, woo!).
It's 500 words total for two statements.
The prompts are:
How has your family, environment, and culture changed you?
and
What qualities or unique characteristics do you possess that will add to the UCF community?</p>

<p>If anyone would be willing to read over my personal statements, please PM me, or comment so I can PM you. Thanks!</p>

<p>bump? 83 views, no PMs or comments… please help!</p>

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