<p>Hello everyone, </p>
<p>I just wrote my 150-word essay:
Short Answer:
In the space provided below, please briefly elaborate (150 words or fewer) on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience).</p>
<p>It doesnt say how it should be, and I write mine pretty emotional. I'm not sure if that is not the rule, or it is good. I need advices!!</p>
<p>Thank you very much for your attention!</p>
<p>i wouldn't go overboard, but if it shows how you feel on the activity, why not? I can read it if you want, and tell you my opinion</p>
<p>I have a similar question: should I narrate a specific event of an activity or should I just write generally about what I do for an extracurricular activity.</p>
<p>I picked one of the most special thing i did, and with some emotional things, I'm not sure if this is what they want</p>
<p>i wrote about an ec i do and the activities it entails. it is pretty passionate/emotional. not too much tho</p>
<p>Uhm, just so you know, if anyone who wants to take a look with this essay, and give some advices, I can PM you</p>
<p>I'll read and critique it</p>
<p>ill look over</p>
<p>PM, ill read it</p>
<p>BTW: you shouldn't make it <em>too</em> emotional or "deep" unless you can fully express all your ideas in just 150 words.</p>
<p>ill look at it</p>
<p>bump~~....</p>
<p>uhm, no replies...</p>
<p>fishers......disappointed</p>